tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285015481837682105.post1405842114682001176..comments2023-10-14T05:16:12.776-07:00Comments on THE THRILLER GUY: How Many Times Does TG Have to Tell You?Allen Appelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07577225721733421143noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285015481837682105.post-34842481504658132572010-09-22T17:44:35.308-07:002010-09-22T17:44:35.308-07:00This is what I'm talking about, people. Joel h...This is what I'm talking about, people. Joel here has rewritten the scene and it's just as good (better, really) than the fly all over the place original. You don't need that fakey movie crap.Allen Appelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07577225721733421143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285015481837682105.post-34278851616362170972010-09-22T16:14:09.986-07:002010-09-22T16:14:09.986-07:00A more believable way that scene would have gone d...A more believable way that scene would have gone down would be like this - given that the bullet was subsonic - from the description, and extremely well placed to cause that rag-doll unconsciousness or death:<br /><br />“The report of the pistol was little more than a cough, but McLeod's body jerked in surprise. He started to stand, but the reflex ended almost before it began and he sagged back to his seat. His dead weight toppled the chair over and he crashed to the floor, limbs splayed, his mouth opening and closing, his eyelids flickering.”Joel Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11327523450299427936noreply@blogger.com